GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL!!!!!!!!!
I am DONE WITH THIS DRAFT!
It clocks in at ONE HUNDRED THOUSAND FOUR HUNDRED SEVENTY FOUR words! (Not counting the approx 26K of Deadfall.)
And here is my VErY DEEP AND TOUCHING, EXTREMELY WELL-WRITTEN final line, which you will remember for ALWAYS:
Anyway. DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONE!
It clocks in at ONE HUNDRED THOUSAND FOUR HUNDRED SEVENTY FOUR words! (Not counting the approx 26K of Deadfall.)
And here is my VErY DEEP AND TOUCHING, EXTREMELY WELL-WRITTEN final line, which you will remember for ALWAYS:
[INSERT VERY TOUCHING ENDING PARAGRAPH OR TWO RIGHT HERE AND THIS FUCKER IS DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONE](In all seriousness, I feel I need to reread the whole thing to come up with the proper resonances that should be here.)
Anyway. DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONE!
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(Do you want me to read the snippets I have backlogged, or would you rather have me read a revised version down the road? Up to you.)
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I’d rather you read the snippets and respond because it lets me know if bits hit or not, and sometimes you say things that make me go “Ah, I need to emphasize/de-emphasize that” etc.
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(And notes to yourself to be brilliant later are the best time-honoured tradition.)
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I have a couple of similar points, one of which is basically “Menzo says this only in an intelligent way, not the way it’s written.”
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